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英語メールの書き方114:上司に資料の確認を催促する

こんなシチュエーション、お仕事でありませんか?

上司にお願いしていた資料の確認を急いでもらいたい。

 

英文メールで「上司に資料の確認を催促する」お手本を動画でチェック!

こちらの動画では、伝えるべきメッセージとニュアンスを書き手が考えているところから、以下の内容のメールを実際に英語で書く様子までをご覧いただけます。

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ヒカさん、

今日お時間ないかもしれませんが、二日前にお送りしたZipanの営業資料を本日17:00までにご確認いただけませんでしょうか?Zipanのチームが明日の展示会に営業資料を持っていきたいそうでして、修正箇所が見つかった場合は本日中に直さなければなりません。

あまりお時間を取らないと良いのですが・・・よろしくお願いします。

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今後の仕事での英語メールの参考になれば幸いです。

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